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  The Following is an excerpt from the 
  screenplay "Pathos Bill" by Mark W. 
  Gray.  Any unauthorized duplication 
  or distribution is strictly 
  prohibited.
  
  ©1998 Mark W. Gray
  WGA Registered 
  #686823

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       INT COCKTAIL LOUNGE - NIGHT

       A portly MIDDLE AGED MAN in a tight T-shirt bearing the 
       legend "I LOVE TO PARTY" mumbles/sings "Besse me Mucho" into 
       the Karaoke microphone.  A glitter-glue sign behind him 
       reads:  "Wednesday is Lady's Night".  The bar is populated 
       with more patrons of mid-western proportion, as well as a few 
       youngish women sporting high-perm hairdos and semi-sexy 
       outfits.  They are all but oblivious to the drowsy crooner.  
       Bill, at the bar, tries to get the attention of the 
       bartender, CHIP, who seems way too busy for such a small 
       crowd.

                           BILL
                     	(gesturing)
                 'Scuse me... Say, could I... 'Scuse me...

                           CHIP
                 Hang on, one sec.

       Chip pours from five or six bottles into a blender and 
       blends.  He pours out a bizarre fluorescent concoction into 
       two sugar encrusted margarita glasses.  He adds umbrellas, 
       skewered fruit, etc. and puts them on a tray in the waitress 
       station.

                           CHIP
                 Okay. What can I do you for?

                           BILL
                 What are those?

                           CHIP
                 That there's called a Corpus Christi.  
                 It's like a margarita but with 151 rum, 
                 vodka, tequila, and Grande Marnier in a 
                 sugared glass.  Oh, and cranberry juice.

                           BILL
                 Body of Christ, you're not kidding. 

                           CHIP
                 Body of What?

                           BILL
                 Body of Christ.  You know, Corpus 
                 Christi, Body of Christ.  It's Latin for 
                 Body of Christ.

                           CHIP
                 No, I don't think so.  This is like from 
                 Corpus Christi, Texas.  You know, down 
                 south.

                           BILL
                 Ah.  I'll just have a Scotch on the 
                 rocks, please.  Do you have Dewars?

                           CHIP
                 Yeah, but that's a call brand.  It's 75¢ 
                 extra.

                           BILL
                 Make it a double.

                           CHIP
                 Roger that.

       Chip gets to work.  Bill watches a WAITRESS collect the 
       Corpus Christis and deliver them to two women, BRANDY and 
       KIM, seated at a table across the room.  Chip puts Bill's 
       cocktail on the bar.

                           CHIP
                 Here y'are.  That's three twenty-five.  
                 But, uh,  maybe you better start a tab.

       Chip nods slightly, indicating Brandy and Kim who are now 
       making a bee line across the room toward Bill.  

                           CHIP
                     (conspiratorially)
                 I tell ya.  Them Corpus Christis are like 
                 Spanish Fly.

       Turning to look, Bill picks up his drink and immediately 
       sloshes it onto himself.

                           BILL
                 Shit.  Yeah, gimme a tab.

       As he sips and blots, Brandy and Kim sidle up on his blind 
       side.

                           KIM
                 Yeah, they pour 'em pretty full here, 
                 huh?

                           BILL
                 No, I was just trying to get drunk by 
                 osmosis.

                           KIM
                     (doesn't get it) 
                 Yeah, we come here all the time.  It's 
                 great.

                           BILL
                 Yeah, great.  Are you gonna sing?

                           BRANDY
                 They ain't got no good songs here.  Kim's 
                 gonna do "Voulez-Vous Couchez Avec Moi".

                           KIM
                 Shut up!  You're gonna.  I need to have a 
                 couple more of these first. (drinks)

                           BILL
                 So, you two are from around here?

                           BRANDY
                 Yep.  We go to the community college.  
                 And we're room mates.  I'm originally 
                 from Tucamcari, though.  That's in New 
                 Mexico.

                           BILL
                 Sounds like a nice place.

                           KIM
                 Yeah, if you're a tumbleweed.

                           BRANDY
                 Yeah, Amarillo's a lot more cosmopolitan.

                           BILL
                 Yes, I can see that.

       The singer finishes "Besse me Mucho" to a smattering of 
       disinterested applause.  

                           DJ
                 Alllright.  That was Earl.  Great job 
                 Earl.  Now I need Bernice... Bernice.  
                 Where are you, Sweetheart.  C'mon... Bern- 
                 There you are!

       BERNICE, a bargain-basement Patsy Cline in full satin and 
       fringe regalia approaches the microphone.

                           KIM
                 Hey! Bernice! Whooo!
                     (to Bill)
                 She's really good.

       Bernice begins a slow, torchy number.  And she is pretty 
       good.  Bill and the girls get into the music.

                           BILL
                 Wow.

                           BRANDY
                 So, are you staying at the hotel?

                           BILL
                 Yeah,  I'm driving cross country to 
                 California.  

                           BRANDY
                 Really?  Where from?

                           BILL
                 Indianapolis.  It's not all the way 
                 across the country from LA, but it's at 
                 least two thirds.  Route 66.  You know...

                           BRANDY
                 That's a long way to go all by yourself.

                           BILL
                 Oh, I had a friend with me; it's his car; 
                 but he had to get home in a big hurry.  
                 His wife went into labor.

                           KIM
                 Oh my God.  Did she have the baby right 
                 in the car?

                           BILL
                 No, no.  She's back in LA.  He had to 
                 catch a plane in Oklahoma.  

                           BRANDY
                 But that's in the other direction.

                           KIM
                 Did you have to back-track?

                           BILL
                 No no. It was on the way.  I mean, we 
                 were in Oklahoma when he got the call.  
                 And there was a plane out of Oklahoma 
                 City.  It was really pretty lucky how it 
                 worked out.

                           KIM
                 I been to that airport.

                           BRANDY
                 You're driving his car all the way out 
                 there all by yourself?  That's so sweet.

                           BILL
                 Well, I was interested in seeing America; 
                 you know, the adventure- Keroac, "On the 
                 Road" -  meeting interesting people. []

                           BRANDY
                 I always wanted to go to Hollywood and 
                 see all the movie stars.  Do you work in 
                 the movies?

                           BILL
                 Well, I'm not from...  I mean, my friend 
                 does.  He's always talking about some 
                 celebrity he's just seen in the grocery 
                 store.  I think Tony Danza lives in his 
                 neighborhood.

                           BRANDY
                 Wow, that's so cool.  

                           KIM
                     (to someone in the crowd)
                 Hey Lurlene!
                     (to Bill)
                 Well, it was nice to meet you...

                           BILL
                 Bill.

                           KIM
                 Bill.  I'm Kim and this is Brandy.  She's 
                 a fine girl.

                           BRANDY
                 Shut up!

                           KIM
                 Have a good trip!

       She exchanges looks with Brandy and scoots off toward 
       Lurlene.  

                           KIM (cont'd)
                     (walking away)
                 Hey Lurlene! this guy knows Tony Danza!

       A short interval passes while Brandy and Bill listen to the 
       singer and nod at each other.  Recognizing the lull, Brandy 
       tips up her glass and finishes the remaining two thirds.

                           BRANDY
                 So Bill, you wanna buy me a drink?

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  ©1998 Mark W. Gray
  WGA Registered 
  #686823